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Spotting the bot slop

By Communication theory, Communications craft, content, SEO, Uncategorized

By Gideon Todes and Katryna Turner

content, SEO, Thought leadership

A few years back Jamie Oliver did an expose on Turkey Twizzlers, mechanically recovered meat that was both cheap to produce, had very little nutritional value, bore little relation to any real turkey and was satisfying to children, but not in a particularly healthy way.

And where nutrition goes, so too does information. As we enter the AI age, it’s possible to produce content for the sake of marketing in a comparable way as Turkey Twizzlers.

Highly engineered for a particular palate, in this case the google search engine, low on real information and authenticity. The other similarity is that the more you investigate how it’s produced the less appealing it becomes.

Slop text and junk food share many attributes. You read slop and it leaves you with the sensation that you’ve read something, but the content hasn’t really told you very much. There will be a lot of on one hand …and then again on the other, with a good sprinkling of the famed em dashes, but real content with opinion and personality will be hard to find.

If you’re using AI to help you write, the food analogy is helpful.

Where cooking a pie is time intensive you can always buy one ready made. If it lacks a little authenticity you can add some of your own herbs to help that fresh flavour that factory food can’t replicate.

One person I know takes a certain brand of fish pie, and because he considers their offering a bit short on real fish, adds some actual fish under the crust.

You can do the same with writing with AI. Add some personally harvested information and suddenly the somewhat anodyne writing feels more authentic and better researched.

Just like fresh herbs, fresh content is the hardest thing for a machine commoditising process to emulate.

A particular interview with a particular point that illustrates a more general issue is what distinguishes an authentic piece of writing, say by a first rate journalist, from the run of the mill AI slop.

All of this is well understood by the AI tech giants and this year Google has raised its game and created its EEAT update. EEAT in case you aren’t aware of the acronym, stands for Experience, Expertise, Authority and Trust. In other words, the search engine system wants to see named authors with a history of expertise in the field showing their experience and expertise before they send their search clients to your site.

How deep this goes is yet to be seen but google will integrate your EEAT score with the bounce rates to see how your content stacks up.

One thing we’ve noticed is that the quality of content writing is already showing an improvement. Some of the more obviously sloppy content is already disappearing and being replaced with visibly more muscular informative content.

One area of interest for the authors is professional services: How will AI affect the content that supports marketing for these?

If you are looking for your next consultant to do that big engagement, it helps if their organisation puts out engaging relevant insightful content. Too much slop and you might question their credentials even if their brand history suggests deep sector knowledge.

As you bring an editor’s eye across material from various places, there are some good performers doing it better than others.

Goldman Sachs seems to have effectively a mini broadcast station on Youtube where it makes use of its expertise in nicely produced intelligent content. The written content stands out as a quality offering too and the mix of original content, and a clear point of view means that this is way above the slop fare. A review of McKinsey’s content by contrast was disappointing. Quite a lot of obviously self serving content that is lacking a journalistic feel. This had a more consultant style of writing, but a consultant who doesn’t want to divulge the real story.

Use a bot to spot a bot

For a bit of fun and to develop a tool, the authors of this paper enlisted the help of Claude, our friendly AI bot and developed our own tool for evaluating content.

We started by asking Claude for a definition of AI Slop. We then asked it to build a tracker table of all the slop and not slop we were feeding into it. 0 represented original human form nutritious content, and 10 was max slop.

We also experimented with taking text that was AI generated, and adding human sourced content into it.

For comparison, we put David Abbott’s famous Chivas regal copy into the AI slop tracker. This masterpiece of copywriting was created 10 years before Tim Berners Lee had even conceived his hyper text language.

David Abbott, Chivas Regal ‘Father’s Day’, 1980 — Abbott Mead Vickers / DDB

The deeply personal granular information, the way the text operated between the lines meant that perhaps unsurprisingly the AI Slop factor was determined to be zero.

But on the kind of texts that would have Abbott turning in his grave, the AI Slop factor was considerably higher.

These were the results. But you can ask Claude to do similar for any piece of text you chose,

Slop factor tracker — professional services & advertising

Lowest Slop factor Category Score Key reason for score

Chivas Regal ‘Father’s Day’

David Abbott, 1980 — Abbott Mead Vickers / DDB

Advertising 0.5 Repeated ‘Because’ paragraphs, 285 words, brand named once. Autobiographical, pre-AI, zero filler. Half-point only because zero isn’t on the scale.

When AI learns how the world works

Goldman Sachs

Finance / research 1.5 Named authors (Lee, Keyserling), named researchers (LeCun, Li, World Labs), genuine thesis on world models vs LLMs. Earns its length.

Beyond the Employment Rights Act — NDA consultation

Freshfields

Legal 1.5 Named partners (Mendel, Carruthers), specific legislation (s.202A ERA 2025), 8 July 2026 deadline cited. Dry but zero padding.

Where are gas prices actually squeezing spend?

Consumer Edge

Data / research 2.0 Named author (Gunther, SVP Research), proprietary transaction data, counterintuitive CA vs AZ thesis. Stops where paywall begins.

2026 Global M&A industry trends

PwC

Consulting 2.5 Named authors, specific megadeal counts (26 tech, 13 banking), OECD projections cited. K-shaped framing is sharp. Some M&A boilerplate.

AI-first mission: reimagining professional services

PwC

Consulting / AI 2.5 Sharp framing (‘AI extends expertise, judgment creates value’) but light on evidence. Brand narrative with no survey data or named authors.

Economic conditions outlook, Dec 2025

McKinsey

Consulting / macro 3.0 1,011 respondents, 81 nations, named author (Sven Smit). Quarterly template is formulaic; hedged to vagueness in places.

GT unveils AI tool pairing pros with agents

Grant Thornton

Accounting / PR 6.5 Named quotes but almost every line is brand language: ‘world class service,’ ‘ever evolving commercial and technology landscape,’ ‘unlock new opportunities.’ Press release genre, but the slop density is high.

HR trends to watch in 2025: building the human-centric workplace

Workday

HR tech / B2B 7.5 No named authors. Dense with ’empower your workforce,’ ‘ever-changing landscape,’ ‘thrive in 2025 and beyond.’ Cites ‘according to research’ without attribution — three times. Product-led lead-gen dressed as insight.

HR trends in 2025: what’s shaping the future of work?

Staffbase

HR tech / B2B 8.5 Opens ‘Human resources is a dynamic field, constantly evolving.’ ‘Blockchain is a game-changer for HR.’ ‘Drive meaningful change.’ Anonymous authorship, every section an SEO checklist. References ‘a recent Forbes article’ without linking it.
Highest slop factor

A couple of trends are becoming clearer.

First, as the cost of producing TV and written content comes down, you no longer have to be a broadcasting organization to do it. Anyone with a higher level iphone and a microphone and a quiet office can do it.

A Goldman Sachs type operation with its highly paid, highly motivated workforce can with a little effort start to eat the lunch of business broadcasting channels with their in-house efforts.

The second thing that is emerging is that just as AI is helping produce slop, other forms of AI will, like we have just done, be used to weed it out.

So rather than seeing AI as the tool that creates the noise, it could focus us humans on producing more fresh content.

But you don’t have to have a Goldman Sachs budget to be able to do less sloppy things. One of the recent content activities your author has been engaged in recently is doing zoom interviews with end user clients. Intercut that with end user social content and you get some real content bangs for buck. See this short video profile.

This turns out to be quite useful beyond EEAT. Talking to customers is always a great idea and grabbing content, understanding targets and tidying up any user feedback issues can all be done in one interview.

So rather than seeing AI as the ushering in a sewerful of sloppage, there is a more positive take: We can see it as a tool that’s part of a dynamic equilibrium, between machine and human interaction, and between commoditisation and individuality.

It’s not only less depressing to see it that way, it’s probably a more accurate representation of what’s going on in our world.

Far from being a race to the bottom the AI take over of content might just become a slow wobble to the top.

Abbott at his deeply personal best

 

Banksy

By Communication theory, Creativity

One of the simplest types of ideas to pull apart are those without a proposition underneath them. And Banksy is a master of ideas for their own sake. Let’s take a closer look.

Start with a really strong visual item with its own very clear value set. This image is about violence, rebellion, unrest, protest, anti-authority etc.

What are we expecting the image to have as a projectile? Could be any in the set of violent, riot-worthy objects that are hand-held. In the larger set are burning cars and smashed windows. But hand grendade bottle and brick are all roughly the same size and emotive value.

Inverting the value gives you another set of objects. Things associated with fluffy love and appreciation.

Any of the fluffy love and appreciaton set could be here, but the one that works best looks a bit like a molotov cocktail and is most easily recognisable from its shape.

Et voila, the finished bansky idea with a bit of colour contrast to help it along. There is no real proposition in a Banksy so in some ways its the simplest form of idea to pull apart.

Communication and change in behaviour

By Communication theory, Uncategorized

This is Noah at 18 months, and he has only a tiny vocabulary. Barely Mama or Dada. One of his only words is “Dee” short for Hey Dugee!  his favourite television program. But he knows that I’m saying No Dee because his whole body reacts, in desolation at the thought of No Dee, and he chucks the remote control down too.

Then when I say “Actually yes Dee” he perks up, picks up the controller and acknowledges that we’ll be watching the TV show Dee.

A perfect demonstration of communication in its simplest form.

Communication changes behaviour.

And change is a vital part of any storyline.

See how these three elements fit together here.

Witness David Attenborough

By Communication theory, Communications craft, Story, Structure, Thought leadership, Uncategorized, What's out there now

In David Attenborough’s short trailer he demonstrates how to launch an argument and sell in documentary in just a few powerful seconds. If you’ve done the Copycourse you’ll recognise the structure he uses a mile off.

David Attenborough: I am David Attenborough and I am 93. I ‘ve had the most extraordinary life. It’s only now that I appreciate how extraordinary. The living world is a unique and spectacular Marvel. Yet the way we humans live on earth is sending it into a decline. Human beings have over run over the world. We are replacing the wild with the tame.

This film is my witness statement about my vision for the future. The story about how we came to make this, our greatest mistake. How if we act now we can yet to put it right. Our planet is heading for disaster. You need to learn how to work rather nature rather than against it. And I’m going to tell you how. In cinemas 2020.

 

What’s the contract

By Communication theory, Contract theory, Nudge, Uncategorized

This is a brass plaque that used to live where the post office was in Kentish Town, London. It remains one of the most improbable and impenetrable sentences I’ve ever read. And yet it exists and presumably makes sense in some kind of context. That context will of course be a legal one, and to some lawyer maybe from another century it makes perfect sense. The point is, this communication is best and perhaps only understood in terms of a contract that lies outside the communication itself.
One question that is very useful to ask is: What’s the contract that surrounds a piece of text? Is it a coercive context like a legal framework? Or is it a persuasive context like an advertising poster? Every piece of writing has a contract and it’s usually implicit.
A broadsheet newspaper might be: Pay to read this and we will give you thoughts ideas and information that is reasonably accurate and will make you look more informed in your social and business interactions. We will be interesting enough for you to want to read.
A parking ticket and parking signage has a very different contract: Read this carefully or not, it’s up to you. Fail to understand what we mean and we’ll tow your car away anyway.
The less well a parking signage is written the more revenue the council can collect. It’s one of the reasons signage is often so difficult to fathom.

Observations and Insights

By Communication theory, content, Contract theory, Uncategorized

What’s the difference between an observation and an insight? Insights are generally based on observations but they go further. They’re generally unexpected, and they have real value to the reader.

They often require joining some dots and give an ah ha moment to the person who discovers them or is told them for the first time. They are often the product of asking the question “why?”

People generally read text for insights but they want to be able to see that the observations are there to back those insights up.

Story change and communication

By Communication theory, content, Story, Strategy, Uncategorized

From zero to hero. The classic log line for a Hollywood storyline. Why? because there’s lots of change implicit in zeros becoming heros. A perfect example of this would be the log-line for Down and Out in Beverly Hills. Where the filthy rich meet the dirty poor. You can almost see that there will be change for both the two main characters. Without change there can be no story and without story there’s no communication. These three things go together and if you’re going to understand any one of them you need to understand them all.

Another way of looking at this is by investigating what happens when there’s no change. And by that we also mean no change in expectation. If you were to try to build a story around visiting a vending machine: You go to the a vending machine in some big building.

You select, say a Kit Kat, put your money in, and a Kit Kat duly drops onto the tray. Well, there’s no possible story that can come out of that because in no way has any expectation been thwarted or confounded. However, if a Kit Kat didn’t drop down, but something much more unexpected did, say a packet of class A drugs, you have the beginnings of a storyline.

Starting with a story

By Communication theory, Communications craft, content, Funny, Thought leadership, Uncategorized, What's out there now


Masters of story don’t start with a simple fact or assertion, they weave a story that does the same thing.
Rabbi Jonathan Sacks could have begun his speech by simply saying something like “all faiths have similarities, but they also have interesting differences.”
That would have been a perfectly coherent way to start a speech at an interfaith dinner. But by starting with a story that demonstrates the same thing, he does so much more than assert a first beat.
He demonstrates mastery of the story form, establishes his own character as a player at Government level, and also brings some laughs to the room. But the story is always in the service of demonstrating the first beat of the rest of his speech.

Moving a tone on

By B2B, Communication theory, Communications craft, Strategy, Tone, Uncategorized

Jaguar tone book
Asthma UK
Anglian Water

One of charts that really helps when you’re discussing verbal, or indeed any type of brand identity is the one above. Based on Jungian archetypes and developed by Mark and Pearson,  it forms a neat representation of different brand flavours.

The question you start with is the usual consultancy one: where are we now? The next question is where would we like to get to? If an organisation product or service is say in the ruler section, maybe they want to transform and become a mate? If they are a ruler, what sort of ruler are they? Bossy and aloof in a not good way or alternatively, aspirational in the way British Airways was, when it was at its best? Or maybe the content is such a mish-mash it doesn’t really have any distinct tone you can speak of. Maybe it’s just a big pic’n mix nothing.

These are the issues that form the basis of an audit, and obviously you need to do this in some form, even if only in a very cursory way. In the old days it was all about the branding agency auditing, presenting and ultimately delivering a verbal identity, but my view is that doesn’t really wash nowadays.

Most organisations have scores of content marketing and corporate writers and there’s no reason to leave them outside the process. This means that repositioning a company needs to be done with them in a collaborative training and exploratory way, rather than brought down from on high and ‘rolled out’.

Not that there’s anything wrong with ‘rolling something out’, it just doesn’t make any allowance for the way organisations usually work. You usually find that it’s one thing for a verbal branding agency to blithely specify a few choice phrases, that amount to general good writing practice, but it’s quite another to work through the daily diet of communications the team actually have to put out.

It’s for this reason that training, facilitation, content and verbal brand repositioning are a great combination. And you can’t really substitute them for a few standard bromides about copywriting.